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Behind the wall...

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a shot i recently finished for a personal project  ;)

 

 

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It's interesting but it seems like one effect after another, as if you are presenting effects, but not really telling a story. Perhaps if a single tendril forced it's way through, then more tendrils, that would give a reason for the effects to exist.

I like the quality though, and the tracking looking looks good.

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1 hour ago, Atom said:

It's interesting but ...

hahahahah yes you are right  :)   

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Very enjoyable! I can definitely see the effort and skill. Reminds me of my own work. 

If I were the director I would ask to cut the sequence into more and shorter dramatic shots. Maybe have the camera closely following the breakup of the wall. Also if the tenticles came out faster, if there were more of them and more varied shapes and sizes and speeds it would be scarier. I could also see it being scary if it were at night. Maybe have more stuff flying at the camera. Overall it seems a bit relaxed instead of tense and demonic like if someone could be having lunch next to them.

Not much to change to get close to stuff from classics like Hellboy.

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4 hours ago, kleer001 said:

Very enjoyable!...

thanks :) yes you are right, :)  yes i thought in a night setup could be scary,  but that idea came to my mind after :P 

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Great exercice! Keep on that!

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Thanks for sharing it!

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João Marco

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