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eman305

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It's helps know what your technical and artistic goals are with this shot. i.e. what are you trying to show, the fire simultion, horse animation, lighting etc. cheers!

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Good work. To take it to the next level try to add some variety as the flames at the start look like the flames at the end. Have the fire light up some something, ie ground/environment.

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Hi,

 

Great work!

 

Suggestions I would like to make:

  • Light up a ground plane by the fire
  • Have the camera track along the horse, with a bit of handheld motion to it. Like if the camera man is on a quad or something.

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  • Try to make the horse out of flames as well. A starting point would be to turn the horse in a volume and have that emit fire with velocity from the horse his motion.

 

Good luck :-)

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Hi,

 

Great work!

 

Suggestions I would like to make:

  • Light up a ground plane by the fire
  • Have the camera track along the horse, with a bit of handheld motion to it. Like if the camera man is on a quad or something.

Advanced suggestion

  • Try to make the horse out of flames as well. A starting point would be to turn the horse in a volume and have that emit fire with velocity from the horse his motion.

 

Good luck :-)

 

Hi,

 

Great work!

 

Suggestions I would like to make:

  • Light up a ground plane by the fire
  • Have the camera track along the horse, with a bit of handheld motion to it. Like if the camera man is on a quad or something.

Advanced suggestion

  • Try to make the horse out of flames as well. A starting point would be to turn the horse in a volume and have that emit fire with velocity from the horse his motion.

 

Good luck :-)

Hi all and thanks

 

I did try to make the horse into fire but I was having trouble getting any detail it just looked too much like a moving sun anyone have any tips on how to get a good resolute I'd be grateful.

 

Please and Thank you 

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