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Good! That's some awesome tracking, shading, lighting, and texturing.

The shadows are pretty darn good, no worries about that.

What I did find distracting was the regularity of the spots on the caps.

I'm a bit of a mycophile myself, and here's what I'd like to see:

- varied density of dots on top, from almost none to dozens.

- smaller white dots

- accelerating growth, they start small and slow and then speed up their growth

- bigger at the end, to nearly the size of the lamp

- continual growth of new ones, even at the end there should be some small ones poking up

- clustered growth, three to five fruiting bodies growing out of a small area together

- when they grow start out at an oblique angle and gently curve up

- lots more of the little mushies, maybe even a few curving up from under the desk

Here's a good examply of what I'm talking about:

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  • 3 weeks later...

Sorry for the late reply, been very busy lately.

I appreciate the advice, especially the detailed critique kleer. I agree with a lot that you said and will probably apply much of your advice when I get a chance to work on it some more, though unfortunately this project has been put on the backburner for now. :blink:

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