dyei nightmare Posted January 23, 2019 Share Posted January 23, 2019 (edited) a shot i recently finished for a personal project Edited January 23, 2019 by dyei nightmare 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atom Posted January 23, 2019 Share Posted January 23, 2019 (edited) It's interesting but it seems like one effect after another, as if you are presenting effects, but not really telling a story. Perhaps if a single tendril forced it's way through, then more tendrils, that would give a reason for the effects to exist. I like the quality though, and the tracking looking looks good. Edited January 23, 2019 by Atom Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dyei nightmare Posted January 23, 2019 Author Share Posted January 23, 2019 (edited) 1 hour ago, Atom said: It's interesting but ... hahahahah yes you are right Edited January 23, 2019 by dyei nightmare Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kleer001 Posted January 23, 2019 Share Posted January 23, 2019 Very enjoyable! I can definitely see the effort and skill. Reminds me of my own work. If I were the director I would ask to cut the sequence into more and shorter dramatic shots. Maybe have the camera closely following the breakup of the wall. Also if the tenticles came out faster, if there were more of them and more varied shapes and sizes and speeds it would be scarier. I could also see it being scary if it were at night. Maybe have more stuff flying at the camera. Overall it seems a bit relaxed instead of tense and demonic like if someone could be having lunch next to them. Not much to change to get close to stuff from classics like Hellboy. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dyei nightmare Posted January 24, 2019 Author Share Posted January 24, 2019 4 hours ago, kleer001 said: Very enjoyable!... thanks yes you are right, yes i thought in a night setup could be scary, but that idea came to my mind after Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmarco Posted March 14, 2019 Share Posted March 14, 2019 Great exercice! Keep on that! ... Thanks for sharing it! ... João Marco Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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